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Shirley,
Both stories sounded very Irish to me. Someone's always coming home in a
storm and bosses are nothing but trouble for a free spirit.
J.Wolf
F&Q
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Shirley paints vivid pictures with her words in "The Old Grey Mare". I could feel the quiteness and see the horse with her words. I reread the article twice and each time picked up unique points of view as when the horse's main stood up in a cloud although the preceding sentence said the breeze was still. What a masterful way of conveying the approaching storm with the static electicity and dangers of lightening and that elemental sense of survival that the horse instinctly knew in taking shelter in the grove of trees. Well done!!!
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Yes, Shirley, each of us can make a difference, contribute in our own way, and your voice certainly has done so already.
Keep up the good work!
Best,
Lois W. Stern
Author of SEX, LIES AND COSMETIC SURGERY
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Shirley . . .
Your use of imagery is exquiste. Both of these stories are begging for pondering. The kind you read and then carry to a quiet place and reflect. I'm not surprised at your talent. I've read your book. :) Yet, these short word songs hold volumes of music. Thank you.
My best,
Susan Haley, Author
RAINY DAY PEOPLE
FIBERS IN THE WEB
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